Joel's SP93XX
wo wo wo wo wooo wowoooow owo wooo woooooo what the heack does it shoot. and what kind offireing manickensim is it eg.conbustion, patumic, hibread? lookes realy nice. abd the stand is to. but a problem with the stand, if its conbustion, wont it just fly back????
Spelling dude,spelling and it is a pnuematic(duh)
Dude, capitalize (I AM A MODERATOR,YOU CANNOT INSULT ME!!HAHAHA!!)
NOTE FROM PIMPMANN22: Be free of error before you start to criticize, although im disgusted at the level of grammar. I also added the last sentence to your post...
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Dude, capitalize (I AM A MODERATOR,YOU CANNOT INSULT ME!!HAHAHA!!)
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Oh ....pvc wrote:wo wo wo wo wooo wowoooow owo wooo woooooo what the heack does it shoot. and what kind offireing manickensim is it eg.conbustion, patumic, hibread? lookes realy nice. abd the stand is to. but a problem with the stand, if its conbustion, wont it just fly back????
how old are you ?
My first language is french and I think that I am better than you in english ...
This is a pneumatic cannon, it is working with a supah valve, you can buy these valve on http://www.spudtech.com. this is a 2.5" barrel, usually use to shoot tennis ball.
And the stand is only for the picture, the gun is not big enought to have to use a stand.
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Cap'n, I believe you are right:
wo wo wo wo wooo wowoooow owo wooo woooooo <b>w</b>hat the <b>heack</b> does it shoot. <b>a</b>nd <i>what kind of <b>(no space)</b> fir<b>e</b>ing <b>manickensim</b> is it</i> eg. <b>conbustion</b>, <b>patumic</b>, <b>hibread</b>? <b>(is this an allowable eliptical clause? IDK, so I'm not counting it as an error...)l</b>ook<b>e</b>s realy nice. <b>abd</b> the stand is <b>to</b>. <b>b</b>ut a problem with the stand, if its <b>conbustion</b>, <b>wont</b> it just fly back????
That's... 15 errors, 14 if you only count the mispelling of "combustion" once. There are 39 words, so that's more than one error every 3 words. In addition to this, there is at least one "questionable construction", indicated by italics.
Meanwhile...
Oh ....
<b>h</b>ow old are you ?
My first language is french and I think that I am better than you <i>in english</i> ... (that's a questionable construction)
This is a pneumatic cannon, it is working with a supah valve, you can buy these valve on http://www.spudtech.com. <b>t</b>his is a 2.5" barrel, usually use<b>d</b> (wrong tense) to shoot tennis ball<b>s</b> (there should have been an s).
(these two scentances might be run-ons. I'm not sure.)
And the stand is only for the picture, the gun is not big enought to have to use a stand.
So, that's 4 errors/72 words (1 error in 18 words... 6 times better) with 3 questionable constructions.
wo wo wo wo wooo wowoooow owo wooo woooooo <b>w</b>hat the <b>heack</b> does it shoot. <b>a</b>nd <i>what kind of <b>(no space)</b> fir<b>e</b>ing <b>manickensim</b> is it</i> eg. <b>conbustion</b>, <b>patumic</b>, <b>hibread</b>? <b>(is this an allowable eliptical clause? IDK, so I'm not counting it as an error...)l</b>ook<b>e</b>s realy nice. <b>abd</b> the stand is <b>to</b>. <b>b</b>ut a problem with the stand, if its <b>conbustion</b>, <b>wont</b> it just fly back????
That's... 15 errors, 14 if you only count the mispelling of "combustion" once. There are 39 words, so that's more than one error every 3 words. In addition to this, there is at least one "questionable construction", indicated by italics.
Meanwhile...
Oh ....
<b>h</b>ow old are you ?
My first language is french and I think that I am better than you <i>in english</i> ... (that's a questionable construction)
This is a pneumatic cannon, it is working with a supah valve, you can buy these valve on http://www.spudtech.com. <b>t</b>his is a 2.5" barrel, usually use<b>d</b> (wrong tense) to shoot tennis ball<b>s</b> (there should have been an s).
(these two scentances might be run-ons. I'm not sure.)
And the stand is only for the picture, the gun is not big enought to have to use a stand.
So, that's 4 errors/72 words (1 error in 18 words... 6 times better) with 3 questionable constructions.
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dude give that guy a break... he already got enough yellin' at and you dont need to overboard. god.
sweet gun though!! are those changable barrels in the background?
sweet gun though!! are those changable barrels in the background?
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pvc wrote:wo wo wo wo wooo wowoooow owo wooo woooooo what the heack does it shoot. and what kind offireing manickensim is it eg.conbustion, patumic, hibread? lookes realy nice. abd the stand is to. but a problem with the stand, if its conbustion, wont it just fly back????
Woh, 2 year olds shouldn't be allowed to join forums. Actually I'd be more worried about him with a spudgun...(hides under table)
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Hahaha yea, then he'd probably aim at my house and shoot down an aeroplane...lol
Another pointless message from you forum gorrila.
Another pointless message from you forum gorrila.
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This is what pvc wrote ill make the words he spelled wrong in collored letters.
Dude pvc you must be retarted. You are asking what kind it is. Does the supah valve give u a clue, well maby the sprinkler valve, maby the chamber below the barrel, what about the hose running to a blow gun from the sprinkler valve, or the hose running from the bottom of tank??? still cant figure it out pvc? If you still dont know what it is then try reading the section that its posted in.
Im sorry to say this but if by now you still dont know what kind of a gun it is then please never drive anything with a motor (car, boat, go-cart).
wo wo wo wo wooo wowoooow owo wooo woooooo what the heack does it shoot. and what kind offireing manickensim is it eg.conbustion, patumic, hibread? lookes realy nice. abd the stand is to. but a problem with the stand, if its conbustion, wont it just fly back????
Dude pvc you must be retarted. You are asking what kind it is. Does the supah valve give u a clue, well maby the sprinkler valve, maby the chamber below the barrel, what about the hose running to a blow gun from the sprinkler valve, or the hose running from the bottom of tank??? still cant figure it out pvc? If you still dont know what it is then try reading the section that its posted in.
Im sorry to say this but if by now you still dont know what kind of a gun it is then please never drive anything with a motor (car, boat, go-cart).